Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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In the abstract, I would suggest

s/as an update of the PMIPv6 specification./as an optional extension of
the PMIPv6 specification./

to be crystal clear that this is not a formal update.