Re: 1 week WGLC on recent changes to draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp (-14 to -16)
Christer Holmberg <[email protected]>
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Pull request for the WGLC comments created: https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-dtls-sdp/pull/22 Regards, Christer -----Original Message----- From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: 20 January 2017 09:58 To: Christian Groves <[email protected]>; Flemming Andreasen <[email protected]>; mmusic <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] 1 week WGLC on recent changes to draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp (-14 to -16) Hi Christian, I¹ll fix as suggested. Thanks! Regards, Christer On 20/01/17 08:53, "Christian Groves" <[email protected]> wrote: >A couple of nits: > >Cl. 5.1 Extraneous ",": "...Endpoints MUST support the cipher suites >as defined in > [I-D.ietf-mmusic-4572-update].<,> > >Cl. 5.3 Para 2: The first sentence should probably use the same >formulation as paragraph 3, "... that requires the establishment of..." > >Cl. 5.4 Note - Missing "s" : "...an answer that include<s>.." > >Cl. 6 Para 1 - Spelling error: "mechansim" -> "mechanism" > >Otherwise OK. > >Regards, Christian > > >On 19/01/2017 9:24 AM, Flemming Andreasen wrote: >> Greetings >> >> We previously completed WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp, however >> there has been some updates to the draft subsequently. We are hereby >> issuing a 1 week WGLC on the the changes from -14 to -16 only, as >> indicated by the following URL: >> >> >>https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-14&url2=d >>raf >>t-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-16 >> >> >> If you have any comments on the updates, please provide those by >> Wednesday, January 25. Comments should be sent to the document >> authors and the MMUSIC WG list. >> >> Thanks >> >> -- Flemming (as MMUSIC co-chair) >> >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> mmusic mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mmusic >> >