Re: Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt

On 6/29/17 5:02 AM, Ali C. Begen wrote:
> Hi everyone
> 
> This fixes Paul's and Gunnar's comments.

I ran this abnf through bap for a formal check and found a couple of things:

1) The definition of media-description still references bandwidth-fields 
rather than bandwidth-field.

2) The definition of key-type is not right - it seems to have lost a lot 
in the process of adopting the %s notation. To preserve compatibility 
with 4566 it should be:

    key-type =            %s"prompt" /
                          %s"clear:" text  /
                          %s"base64:" base64 /
                          %s"uri:" uri


Otherwise looks good to me.

	Thanks,
	Paul

> -acbegen
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> Date: Thu, Jun 29, 2017 at 12:00 PM
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt
> To: Colin Perkins <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>, Mark 
> Handley <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>, Ali 
> Begen <[email protected]>, Van Jacobson <[email protected] 
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> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Ali Begen and posted to the
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> Name:           draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis
> Revision:       21
> Title:          SDP: Session Description Protocol
> Document date:  2017-06-29
> Group:          mmusic
> Pages:          61
> URL: 
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-21.txt 
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> Abstract:
>     This memo defines the Session Description Protocol (SDP).  SDP is
>     intended for describing multimedia sessions for the purposes of
>     session announcement, session invitation, and other forms of
>     multimedia session initiation.  This document obsoletes RFC 4566.
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