Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27

Hi Paul,

Regarding the reference to RFC 4572, the new text in section 10.2.1 references RFC 4572. We earlier agreed we were not going to update that text, and keep an informative reference to RFC 4572.

Regards,

Christer

-----Original Message-----
From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:[email protected]] 
Sent: 29 July 2017 01:07
To: Paul Kyzivat <[email protected]>; [email protected]
Cc: General Area Review Team <[email protected]>; IETF MMUSIC WG <[email protected]>
Subject: RE: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27

Hi Paul,

Thanks for the review. I'll fix references.

Regards,

Christer

-----Original Message-----
From: Paul Kyzivat [mailto:[email protected]] 
Sent: 28 July 2017 04:01
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Cc: General Area Review Team <[email protected]>; IETF MMUSIC WG <[email protected]>
Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27

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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2017-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-24
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-15

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.

(These nits were reported by IdNits. I apologize for not noticing these during my Last Call review.)

Issues:

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits:  2

(1) NIT: Unused Reference: 'RFC5245' is defined on line 1065, but no explicit reference was found in the text

This is now redundant because all the references in the text have been changed to draft-ietf-ice-rfc5245bis.

(2) NIT: Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4572

This is now obsolete because it has been replaced by RFC8122. This draft should now be referencing that.
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