Issue 49: Editorial comments from Maureen (was: Issue list status & plea for help)

<[email protected]> Mon, 24 Oct 2005 13:50:33 +0300
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.mobike
Message-ID <[email protected]>
James Kempf wrote:Subject: Re: [Mobike] Issue list status & plea for
help
> 
> Maureen,
> 
> Yes, I noticed this as well.
> 
> I'd suggest including it even earlier, in the abstract:
> 
>     ...MOBIKE allows hostst to update the (outer) IP 
> addresses associated with IKEv2 and **tunnel mode** IPsec 
> Security Associations...

Ok with me (although the fact we're dealing with tunnel
mode is already mentioned in Section 1: transport mode SAs
don't have "outer (tunnel header)" addresses).

BR,
Pasi