one more editorial comment
Tero Kivinen <[email protected]> Fri, 28 Oct 2005 16:25:53 +0300
| Newsgroups | gmane.ietf.mobike |
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| Message-ID | <[email protected]> |
I think the section 3.5 should change the text:
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o If the response contains an UNACCEPTABLE_ADDRESSES notification,
the initiator MAY select another addresses and retry the exchange,
keep on using the current addresses, or disconnect.
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to
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o If the response contains an UNACCEPTABLE_ADDRESSES notification,
the initiator MAY select another addresses and retry the exchange,
keep on using the previously used addresses, or disconnect.
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as we have already updated the current used addresses of the IKE SA
when we stared the process (i.e. in step 1 of section 3.5)
Actually it might good to use numbered list of the steps, so it would
be easier to point in to that list...
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