Re: Issue 59 (was: protocol draft status and moving forward)

Jari Arkko <[email protected]> Tue, 15 Nov 2005 19:53:40 +0200
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.mobike
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Looks good to me. --Jari

Tero Kivinen wrote:

>[email protected] writes:
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>>Tero Kivinen wrote:
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>>>Yes. People WILL misunderstand any text you put there.
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>>>If you do not want to add the text twice, then add the picture, not
>>>the text. Text is hard to parse when you are trying to implement
>>>things, and then you end up interpreting every hidden meaning before
>>>each word used.
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>>Ok, how about this?
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>That is fine. Even the picture (formula) I used would have been
>sufficient, but this is even better... 
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>>>>Is mentioning IPv6 some more helpful for the reader..?
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>>>Yes. I think it should be repeated also in the security considerations
>>>section, just to tell where this protection can be used. 
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>>Ok, I copied the "This feature is mainly intended for IPv6 and 
>>site-to-site VPN cases, where the administrators may know
>>beforehand that NATs are not present." from 3.9 here.
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>Good.
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