review of draft-ietf-mobike-protocol-04.txt

Francis Dupont writes:
> - in 3.2 page 6 and others
> 
>       Initiator                  Responder
>      -----------                -----------
>    1) HDR, SAi1, KEi, Ni,
>            N(NAT_DETECTION_*_IP)  -->
> 
>                             <--  HDR, SAr1, KEr, Nr,
>                                       N(NAT_DETECTION_*_IP)
>    ...
> 
> => I believe the illustration needs the IP addresses and ports from
> IP and UDP headers. If someone finds a good way to add them, the whole
> stuff will become far more readable.

Yes. Perhaps something like HDR(IP1:500,IP2:500) would be readable
enough? 
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