Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-sieve-include-07.txt

Uploaded -08 with this text moved and (hopefully) clarified.

On Tue, Jul 5, 2011 at 12:11 PM, Barry Leiba <[email protected]> wrote:
>> At long last, I've updated the Include draft. Thanks to Stephan Bosch,
>> whose comments from many months ago I incorporated into this revision.
>
> I only have one issue with this version; the issue has existed since
> the -00 version, but I guess it didn't stand out to me before:
>
> In section 3.2, it's not clear where the first example ends, and this
> text (which I don't think is part of the example) begins:
>   The "include" command may appear anywhere in the script where a
>   control structure is legal.
>
> Can you see what you can do with the layout to make this clearer?  The
> first example is long and has so many parts that it's hard to sort it
> out.
>
>
> Otherwise, I think this is ready to go.
>
> Barry
>
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