draft-ietf-marid-mailfrom-00 (was: New Drafts)

Mark Lentczner wrote:
 
> draft-ietf-marid-mailfrom-00

Thanks, it's almost ready, and it covers the mandatory case
(empty Return-Path) of HELO checks in SPF1.  I like it very
much.  Six typos and other observations:

Line 363 (typo)
<< to determine the list hosts that they allow to use their domain name
>> to determine the list of hosts that they allow to use their domain

Line 415 (policy violation)
<< Tests against some other identity may also be used to override the
<< test against the "Mail From" identity.
>>

Line 455 (designated open relays can be used with spf2.0/mfrom)
<< However, the use of open MTA relays on the Internet has long been
<< noted as a security problem.  Most sites do not run open relays and
<< many refuse e-mail from known open relays.
>>

Line 465 (typo)
<< published SPF records must authorized any MTAs
>> published SPF records must authorize any MTAs

Line 472 (typo)
<< Internal MTAs then do not perform the authorization test To
>> Internal MTAs then do not perform the authorization test.  To

Line 507 ff. (deficits of "exp" are a matter of protocol)
<< The explanation may contain URLs that may be malicious, and/or
<< offensive or misleading text.
>>
                Bye, Frank