Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-15: (with COMMENT)

Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-15: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for addressing my Discuss and Comment points!

I think the current placement of the references to RFCs 8221 and 8247 make it sound
like they are references for IPsec and IKEv2 respectively, and not "just"
the best-practices for configuring them.  Moving the references later
in the sentences would probably help, though I'd recommend adding another
sentence "The current guidance for IPsec and IKEv2 usage is given in
[RFC8221] and [RFC8247], respectively" to be fully clear about why they are
being referenced.