Paul Wouters' No Objection on draft-ietf-dmm-srv6-mobile-uplane-23: (with COMMENT)

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COMMENT:
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#1 I would change the order of the Contributions and Acknowledgements sections
- it is sort of customary to say more important things earlier and
"contributions" seem of higher importance than "acknowledgements"

#2 Appendix A is really an "Implementation Status" section. Those sections are
removed before publication as an RFC, but I see no note to the RFC editor that
this section is to be removed. It should be removed for the same reasons the
"Implementation Status" section is always removed.