[DMM] Review of draft-liebsch-dmm-mts-04

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Dear WG and document authors,

I've reviewed draft-liebsch-dmm-mts-04 (and shared my handwritten comments
with Marco offline). For transparency and completeness, I'm sharing the
most relevant ones here as well.

- Overall I think the document is very useful and well written. I find
though that sometimes it's a bit hard to follow and additional figures
would help.

- Figure 1 is too far from the text that makes reference to it.

- MCN term in page 4 should be expanded.

- I'd add a figure in Section 4.5.

- In section 6.2, U_mcs and D_mts are first introduced. I think they should
be explained there.

- In section 6.3, out of my curiosity, why is RIP mentioned as an example
and not other IGP protocols?

- Figure 10: C_rtg is depicted, but I think this is not explained in the
text.

Thanks,

Carlos

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Universidad Carlos III de Madrid
RTS/CTS podcast: https://castopod.cjbc.eu/@RTSCTS
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Dear WG and document authors,</div><div><br></div><di=
v>I&#39;ve reviewed=C2=A0draft-liebsch-dmm-mts-04 (and shared my handwritte=
n comments with Marco offline). For transparency and completeness, I&#39;m =
sharing the most relevant ones here as well.</div><div><br></div><div>- Ove=
rall I think the document is very useful and well written. I find though th=
at sometimes it&#39;s a bit hard to follow and additional figures would hel=
p.</div><div><br></div><div>- Figure 1 is too far from the text that makes =
reference to it.</div><div><br></div><div>- MCN term in page 4 should be ex=
panded.</div><div><br></div><div>- I&#39;d add a figure in Section 4.5.</di=
v><div><br></div><div>- In section 6.2, U_mcs and D_mts are first introduce=
d. I think they should be explained there.</div><div><br></div><div>- In se=
ction 6.3, out of my curiosity, why is RIP mentioned as an example and not =
other IGP protocols?</div><div><br></div><div>- Figure 10: C_rtg is depicte=
d, but I think this is not explained in the text.</div><div><br></div><div>=
Thanks,</div><div><br></div><div>Carlos</div><div><br></div><span class=3D"=
gmail_signature_prefix">-- </span><br><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_signa=
ture" data-smartmail=3D"gmail_signature"><div dir=3D"ltr">CARLOS J. BERNARD=
OS=C2=A0<a href=3D"https://www.it.uc3m.es/cjbc/" target=3D"_blank">https://=
www.it.uc3m.es/cjbc/</a><br>Universidad Carlos III de Madrid<div><div><span=
 style=3D"color:rgb(34,34,34)">RTS/CTS podcast:=C2=A0</span><a href=3D"http=
s://castopod.cjbc.eu/@RTSCTS" target=3D"_blank">https://castopod.cjbc.eu/@R=
TSCTS</a><br></div><div>YouTube channel:=C2=A0<a href=3D"https://www.youtub=
e.com/CacharREDando/" target=3D"_blank">https://www.youtube.com/CacharREDan=
do/</a></div></div></div></div></div>

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