Re: Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-02.txt

Hi,

I think these latest changes are all good and do address my comments. 

When it comes to Errata 2006, I think it would be good if you create an
informational reference that contain an URL to the Errata. 

Cheers

Magnus

On Thu, 2019-10-03 at 10:27 -0400, David Noveck wrote:
> This is pretty close to -01, as a diff will show.
> 
> Relative to -01, it contains:
> Changes addressing comments in Magnus's review done 9/20.
> Changes addressing pending errata for rfc5661: Summary is that eratta 2006 is
> relevant and is adopted and extended in this version but that the other
> rfc5661 erratas are not relevant to this document but need to be addressed in
> rfc5661bis (and transferred to this document since it will obsolete rfc5661
> when approved)
> 
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> Date: Thu, Oct 3, 2019 at 9:29 AM
> Subject: [nfsv4] I-D Action: draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-02.txt
> To: <[email protected]>
> Cc: <[email protected]>
> 
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Network File System Version 4 WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Network File System (NFS) Version 4 Minor Version 1
> Protocol
>         Authors         : David Noveck
>                           Charles Lever
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-02.txt
>         Pages           : 662
>         Date            : 2019-10-03
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the Network File System (NFS) version 4 minor
>    version 1, including features retained from the base protocol (NFS
>    version 4 minor version 0, which is specified in RFC 7530) and
>    protocol extensions made subsequently.  The later minor version has
>    no dependencies on NFS version 4 minor version 0, and is considered a
>    separate protocol.
> 
>    This document obsoletes RFC5661.  It substantialy revises the
>    treatment of features relating to multi-server namesapce superseding
>    the description of those features appearing in RFC5661.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-02
> https://datatracker.ietf..org/doc/html/draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-02
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-02
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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