Re: FW: I-D Action:draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-natfw-17.txt

I think this document is in good shape and ready for IESG review!

Best,
  Ali

Martin Stiemerling wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> This new version of the NATFW NSLP incorporates the comments received in 
> the WGLC.
> 
> Please check if all comments have been addressed properly.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
>   Martin
> 
> Change log natfw-nslp 16 to 17
> - Removed section 8 "open issues"
> - Removed short form of EXT in favour of calling it always EXTERNAL
> - Restructered section 3.2 "Basic Protocol Overview" for better readability
> - Added second proxy example in 3.2. (3.2.3.  Signaling for Proxy Mode)
> - Fixed different issues of editorial nature
> - Clarified on DTINFO; PC-MRM and LE-MRM usage
> - Handled Jukka's comments (e-mail Dec 04 2007)
> - Handled Niklas' comments (e-mail Dec 11 2007)
> - Handled Lauri's comments (e-amil Dec 13 2007)
> - Handled Teemu's comments (e-mail Dec 19 2007)
> - Changed 'transit' timer definition to 30 seconds, at least.
> - Changed Lifetime error messages, i.e., added two new error codes.
> - Changed proxy flag error handling for NOTIFY.
> - Corrected some misspellings.
> - Fixed duplicated stuff in "NSLP Header" section (Hannes' e-mail Jan 30)
> 
>    Martin
> 
> 
> ------ Weitergeleitete Nachricht
> *Von: *<[email protected]>
> *Datum: *Wed, 30 Jan 2008 15:30:01 +0100
> *An: *<[email protected]>
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> *Unterhaltung: *[NSIS] I-D Action:draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-natfw-17.txt
> *Betreff: *[NSIS] I-D Action:draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-natfw-17.txt
> 
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> This draft is a work item of the Next Steps in Signaling Working Group 
> of the IETF.
> 
> 
>         Title           : NAT/Firewall NSIS Signaling Layer Protocol (NSLP)
>         Author(s)       : M. Stiemerling, et al.
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-natfw-17.txt
>         Pages           : 89
>         Date            : 2008-01-30
> 
> This memo defines the NSIS Signaling Layer Protocol (NSLP) for
> Network Address Translators (NATs) and firewalls.  This NSLP allows
> hosts to signal on the data path for NATs and firewalls to be
> configured according to the needs of the application data flows.  For
> instance, it enables hosts behind NATs to obtain a public reachable
> address and hosts behind firewalls to receive data traffic.  The
> overall architecture is given by the framework and requirements
> defined by the Next Steps in Signaling (NSIS) working group.  The
> network scenarios, the protocol itself, and examples for path-coupled
> signaling are given in this memo.
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