Re: Starting WGLC on draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-sctp-05.txt

Hi Lauri,
Thanks for your very helpful comments, my response below:
Lauri J T Liuhto wrote:
> On Mon, 26 Jan 2009, Martin Stiemerling wrote:
>> Dear all,
>> We start the WGLC on 
>>        draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-sctp-05.txt
> 
>  Hi,
> 
>  I've read the draft, and found no big issues. 
> 
>  - Introduction, page 3, paragraph 3: Typo 'Furturemore'
Thanks - noted.
>  - 3.1.2, page 4 "SCD" seems to refer to Stack Configuration Data of
>    GIST spec, but no such abbreviation is given earlier. I think that
>    a short bullet could be created into chapter 2.
Will do
>  - Reference to the GIST spec is for an old version
Will correct.
>  - Just like Andrew already said, I also would like to see the API
>    functions as given in GIST spec
Yes - will adjust
>  
>  I also second Andrew, the definition of use of DTLS for GIST seems
>  weak. Specifically, the protocol definition for Forwards-DTLS is
>  missing. I feel that the short text in Security Considerations
>  chapter is not enough.
Thanks - will do!
Xiaoming
>  
>  Best Regards,
>  Lauri
>