Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-nsis-rmd (RMD-QOSM - The Resource Management in Diffserv QOS Model) to Experimental RFC

Hi Georgios,
 
RE:

>> 2. It would further clarify if you put in the bit-level example of the RMD-QSPEC, 
>> as called for by QOSM requirements given in the QSPEC draft.  E.g., such a 
>> bit-level QSPEC example is given in Section 4.5 ("Bit-Level QSPEC Example") 
>> of the Y.1541-QOSM draft
>> (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qosm-10#section-4.5).  
>> This would clarify, for example, the QSPEC Procedure being used and other
>> bit-level details.

> Georgios: but this is already specified in Section 4.1. We could include
> a sentence in the appendix: "The bit level format of the RMD-QSPEC is
> specified in Section 4.1."
 
I don't see a full bit-level RMD-QSPEC example in Section 4.1  For one thing, the QSPEC header isn't given.  IMO it would be better to include a full bit-level example, including headers, etc., somewhere in Appendix A.
 
Thanks,
Jerry

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