AD review:draft-ietf-nsis-tunnel-11.txt

Summary: Good to go; will request IETF last call.

Please fix these nits together with any other last call comments you receive:

Section 1., paragraph 1:
>    architecture (e.g., in IPSEC [RFC4301]), and help packet routing in

  Nit: s/IPSEC/IPsec/ (also elsewhere in the document)


Section 2., paragraph 7:
>    End-to-end [QoS] Signaling:  The signaling process that manipulates

  Missing Reference: 'QoS' is mentioned on line 193, but not defined.
  (or did you mean to use normal parentheses?) Also elsewhere.


Section 2., paragraph 11:
>    NSIS-tunnel-aware [Tunnel] End-point Node:  An NSIS-aware Tunnel End-

  Missing Reference: 'Tunnel' is mentioned on line 202, but not defined
  (or did you mean to use normal parentheses?) Also elsewhere.

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