Re: WGLC on draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-auth-02.txt

Reads good to me. One comment:

    AB=00 ("Mandatory"): If the object is not understood, the entire
    message containing it MUST be rejected, and an error message sent
    back (usually of class/code "Protocol Error/Unknown object present").

"Protocol Error/Unknown object present" --> "Protocol Error/Object Type 
Error (subcode Unrecognised Object)"?

Xiaoming

Jukka Manner wrote:
> Dear all,
> 
> there has been only one comment pre-WGLC on the document, and the AD 
> review.
> 
> I would really like people to comment (even shortly), I'll give up to 
> the end of the week for anyone to comment for or against the work to go 
> forward.
> 
> Regards,
> Jukka
> 
> On 06/07/2010 11:09 AM, Jukka Manner wrote:
>> Dear all,
>>
>> This message starts a two week Working Group Last Call on the
>> authorization document. Please review the document send you comments,
>> even a simple "yes, looks good to me" is valuable information.
>>
>> The WGLC ends on Monday 21st of June 2010.
>>
>> Regards,
>> Jukka
>>
>> On 16.5.2010 1:45, [email protected] wrote:
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>> directories.
>>> This draft is a work item of the Next Steps in Signaling Working Group
>>> of the IETF.
>>>
>>>
>>> Title : Authorization for NSIS Signaling Layer Protocols
>>> Author(s) : J. Manner, et al.
>>> Filename : draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-auth-02.txt
>>> Pages : 40
>>> Date : 2010-05-15
>>>
>>> Signaling layer protocols specified within the NSIS framework may
>>> rely on the GIST (General Internet Signaling Transport) protocol to
>>> handle authorization. Still, the signaling layer protocol above GIST
>>> itself may require separate authorization to be performed when a node
>>> receives a request for a certain kind of service or resources. This
>>> draft presents a generic model and object formats for session
>>> authorization within the NSIS Signaling Layer Protocols. The goal of
>>> session authorization is to allow the exchange of information between
>>> network elements in order to authorize the use of resources for a
>>> service and to coordinate actions between the signaling and transport
>>> planes.
>>>
>>> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
>>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-auth-02.txt
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