Re: AD review: draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-auth-02.txt

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Hi,

I re-reviewed -05. There are remaining issues that need to be fixed:

>    X-Type: 8 bits
> 
>       Session authorization attribute type (X-Type) field is one octet.
>       IANA acts as a registry for X-Types as described in Section 8,
>       IANA Considerations.  This specification uses the following
>       X-Types:

Section 8 does not define a registry for X-Types.

> SubType:
> 
>       The following sub-types for AUTH_ENT_ID are defined.  IANA acts as
>       a registry for AUTH_ENT_ID sub-types as described in Section 8,
>       IANA Considerations.  Initially, the registry contains the
>       following sub-types of AUTH_ENT_ID:

Section 8 does not define a registry for these sub-types.

> SubType:
> 
>       The following sub types for SOURCE_ADDR are defined.  IANA acts as
>       a registry for SOURCE_ADDR sub-types as described in Section 8,
>       IANA Considerations.  Initially, the registry contains the
>       following sub types for SOURCE_ADDR:

Section 8 does not define a registry for these sub-types.

> SubType:
> 
>       The following sub types for DEST_ADDR are defined.  IANA acts as a
>       registry for DEST_ADDR sub-types as described in Section 8, IANA
>       Considerations.  Initially, the registry contains the following
>       sub types for DEST_ADDR:

Section 8 does not define a registry for these sub-types.

> 1.  1 NTP_TIMESTAMP NTP Timestamp Format as defined in RFC 5905
>        [RFC5905].

RFC5905 needs to be a normative reference.

Lars
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