Re: AD review: draft-ietf-nsis-nslp-auth-02.txt

Hi Lars,

On 29.07.2010 13:56, Lars Eggert wrote:
> I re-reviewed -05. There are remaining issues that need to be fixed:

Thanks for the fast review feedback.
Version -06 is out, hopefully fixing all remaining issues. Sorry
for not providing a real registry earlier.

>>    X-Type: 8 bits
>>
>>       Session authorization attribute type (X-Type) field is one octet.
>>       IANA acts as a registry for X-Types as described in Section 8,
>>       IANA Considerations.  This specification uses the following
>>       X-Types:
> 
> Section 8 does not define a registry for X-Types.

Done.

>> SubType:
>>
>>       The following sub-types for AUTH_ENT_ID are defined.  IANA acts as
>>       a registry for AUTH_ENT_ID sub-types as described in Section 8,
>>       IANA Considerations.  Initially, the registry contains the
>>       following sub-types of AUTH_ENT_ID:
> 
> Section 8 does not define a registry for these sub-types.

Done.

>> SubType:
>>
>>       The following sub types for SOURCE_ADDR are defined.  IANA acts as
>>       a registry for SOURCE_ADDR sub-types as described in Section 8,
>>       IANA Considerations.  Initially, the registry contains the
>>       following sub types for SOURCE_ADDR:
> 
> Section 8 does not define a registry for these sub-types.

Done.

>> SubType:
>>
>>       The following sub types for DEST_ADDR are defined.  IANA acts as a
>>       registry for DEST_ADDR sub-types as described in Section 8, IANA
>>       Considerations.  Initially, the registry contains the following
>>       sub types for DEST_ADDR:
> 
> Section 8 does not define a registry for these sub-types.

Done.

>> 1.  1 NTP_TIMESTAMP NTP Timestamp Format as defined in RFC 5905
>>        [RFC5905].
> 
> RFC5905 needs to be a normative reference.

Done.

Regards,
 Roland