Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt

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I did a thorough review of this version of the document and really like
it. It has a number of small nits that I'll address in a separate email
message (typos, etc.), but I think that the basic document is fairly
well structured, succinct and clear.

The only semi-major change I'd consider making to it would be to copy a
version of Figure 2 (without the OCP callouts) into the Brief Overview,
after the paragraph "SMTP commands are...". Figure 1 and Figure 2 as
they are now have a lot of differrences, and it would make it clearer
when it gets to the current Figure 2 exactly what OPES is adding to the mix.

As I said, I think this is a good document.

	Tony Hansen
	[email protected]

[email protected] wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Open Pluggable Edge Services Working Group of the IETF.
> 
> 	Title		: OPES SMTP Use Cases
> 	Author(s)	: A. Barbir, M. Stecher
> 	Filename	: draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt
> 	Pages		: 16
> 	Date		: 2005-7-6
> 	
> The Open Pluggable Edge Services (OPES) framework is application
>    agnostic.  Application specific adaptations extend that framework.
>    This document describes OPES SMTP use cases and deployment scenarios
>    in preparation for SMTP adaptation with OPES.
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