Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt

Extremely minor comment:

I really would not had commented on this,   but we just had a rather lengthy
discussion about proper syntax in the SMTP WG and how a systems may reject
the transaction due to improper syntax.  You need angle brackets around the
return path (MAIL FROM:) and forward path (RCPT TO:)
      C: MAIL FROM: <[email protected]>
      S: 250 2.1.0 [email protected] OK
      C: RCPT TO: <[email protected]>
      S: 250 2.1.5 [email protected] it might be best to show syntax
correct examples.

Minor stuff. Otherwise the document sounds look to me!

--
Hector Santos, Santronics Software, Inc.
http://www.santronics.com



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From: "Tony Hansen" <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>
Cc: "Markus Hofmann" <[email protected]>
Sent: Wednesday, July 06, 2005 4:16 PM
Subject: Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt


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> I did a thorough review of this version of the document and really like
> it. It has a number of small nits that I'll address in a separate email
> message (typos, etc.), but I think that the basic document is fairly
> well structured, succinct and clear.
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> The only semi-major change I'd consider making to it would be to copy a
> version of Figure 2 (without the OCP callouts) into the Brief Overview,
> after the paragraph "SMTP commands are...". Figure 1 and Figure 2 as
> they are now have a lot of differrences, and it would make it clearer
> when it gets to the current Figure 2 exactly what OPES is adding to the
mix.
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> As I said, I think this is a good document.
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>  Tony Hansen
>  [email protected]
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> [email protected] wrote:
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Open Pluggable Edge Services Working
Group of the IETF.
> >
> >  Title  : OPES SMTP Use Cases
> >  Author(s) : A. Barbir, M. Stecher
> >  Filename : draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt
> >  Pages  : 16
> >  Date  : 2005-7-6
> >
> > The Open Pluggable Edge Services (OPES) framework is application
> >    agnostic.  Application specific adaptations extend that framework.
> >    This document describes OPES SMTP use cases and deployment scenarios
> >    in preparation for SMTP adaptation with OPES.
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