Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt

Hello,
At 13:44 06-07-2005, Markus Hofmann wrote:
>We are starting WG last call on the "OPES SMTP Use Cases" draft
>(see attached). The last call period closes on Wednesday, July 13 at 
>5pm EDT. Please post

In section 3.1.1, the example should be:

A typical (minimum) SMTP dialog between two OPES SMTP processors 
(MTA) will consist of the following (C: means client, S: means server):

S: 220 mail.example.com Sample ESMTP MAIL Service, Version: 1.2 ready 
at Thu, 20 Jan 2005 11:24:40+0100
C: HELO [192.168.0.138]
S: 250 mail.example.com Hello [192.168.0.138]
C: MAIL FROM:<[email protected]>
S: 250 2.1.0 [email protected] OK
C: RCPT TO:<[email protected]>
S: 250 2.1.5 [email protected]
C: DATA
S: 354 Start mail input; end with "CRLF"."CRLF"
C: From: [email protected]
C: To: [email protected]
C: Subject: Test
C:
C: Hi, this is a test!
C: .
S: 250 2.6.0 "[email protected]" Queued mail for delivery
C: QUIT
S: 221 2.0.0 mail.example.com Service closing transmission channel

The HELO syntax is specified in RFC 2821 Section 4.1.1.1.  The 
address literal was used as no reverse mapping record is available 
for the client.  There is no space after the "MAIL FROM:" and RCPT 
TO:" SMTP commands.

Regards,
-sm