RE: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt

Thank you very much Tony. 

I've added the additional figure and looking forward to receving
your other message.

Regards
Martin

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> Subject: Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt
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> I did a thorough review of this version of the document and 
> really like it. It has a number of small nits that I'll 
> address in a separate email message (typos, etc.), but I 
> think that the basic document is fairly well structured, 
> succinct and clear.
> 
> The only semi-major change I'd consider making to it would be 
> to copy a version of Figure 2 (without the OCP callouts) into 
> the Brief Overview, after the paragraph "SMTP commands 
> are...". Figure 1 and Figure 2 as they are now have a lot of 
> differrences, and it would make it clearer when it gets to 
> the current Figure 2 exactly what OPES is adding to the mix.
> 
> As I said, I think this is a good document.
> 
> 	Tony Hansen
> 	[email protected]
> 
> [email protected] wrote:
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line 
> Internet-Drafts directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Open Pluggable Edge 
> Services Working Group of the IETF.
> > 
> > 	Title		: OPES SMTP Use Cases
> > 	Author(s)	: A. Barbir, M. Stecher
> > 	Filename	: draft-ietf-opes-smtp-use-cases-02.txt
> > 	Pages		: 16
> > 	Date		: 2005-7-6
> > 	
> > The Open Pluggable Edge Services (OPES) framework is application
> >    agnostic.  Application specific adaptations extend that 
> framework.
> >    This document describes OPES SMTP use cases and 
> deployment scenarios
> >    in preparation for SMTP adaptation with OPES.
> 
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