Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-opes-smtp-security-00

SM <[email protected]> Sat, 12 Aug 2006 08:47:11 -0700
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.opes
Message-ID <[email protected]>
At 05:53 12-08-2006, Markus Hofmann wrote:
>We are starting WG last call on the "Integrity, privacy and security 
>in OPES for SMTP" draft (see 
>http://ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-opes-smtp-security-00.txt).

In Section 2.2 "A large number of email filters is deployed at SMTP 
gateways today;" should be:

A large number of email filters are deployed at SMTP gateways today;

Section 2.5 mentions "compromised OPES systems".  If an OPES system 
mangles a message in such a way to make it undeliverable or 
unreadable, it doesn't mean that the system has been compromised.  I 
suggest removing that word.

Section 3.3 has two typos, "Encrpyting" and "Beause".

Regards,
-sm