[pim] draft-ietf-pim-rfc1112bis-08 early Tsvart review

Document: draft-ietf-pim-rfc1112bis
Title: Host Extensions for IP Multicasting and "Any Source Multicasting" (ASM)
IP service Reviewer: Michael Tüxen Review result: Ready with Nits

First of all, I would like to apologize for the long delay in reviewing it.

In particular, I focused on the new text by using rfcdiff as suggested. The
text captures the current state of the API in a good way. Please double check
that all acronyms are resolved on their first use in the final text (when all
text marked for removal is actually removed).

I found two typos:
* A.5. 1st paragpraph
  trough -> through
* A.6 7th paragraph
  use the relevent port -> use the relevant port

Best regards
Michael



_______________________________________________
pim mailing list -- [email protected]
To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]