Re: Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-tan-epp-launchphase-01.txt

Dear Wil and Gavin,

great work!

I do have some "minor" comments:

1. After a claim has been invalidated an applicant may submit additional 
data offline or through an update and the claim goes from status invalid 
to valid or maybe even pending.

2. There is no possibility to update an application. There should be an 
lp:add lp:rem and lp:chg. Of course there could be restrictions based on 
the application status.

3. I would prefer more server considerations. "Server has to ensure that 
in the presence of an lp:xxx the command is processed as an launch phase 
application and not as ordinary domain:xxx command."


/Ulrich



> Dear colleagues,
>
> Gavin and I have published a new version of the draft:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-tan-epp-launchphase-01
>
> This is mostly Gavin's work, with the following changes:
>
> - element names are now in camelCase
> - renamed <trademark> to <claim>
> - a "preValidated" attribute of <claim> element
> - there can be one or more <claim> elements
>
> As usual, we'd love to hear any feedback that you may have.
>
> --
> .wil
> Cloud Registry <http://www.cloudregistry.net>
>
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> Date: Fri, Oct 14, 2011 at 3:16 AM
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-tan-epp-launchphase-01.txt
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>
> A new version of I-D, draft-tan-epp-launchphase-01.txt has been
> successfully submitted by Wil Tan and posted to the IETF repository.
>
> Filename:        draft-tan-epp-launchphase
> Revision:        01
> Title:           Launch Phase Mapping for the Extensible Provisioning
> Protocol (EPP)
> Creation date:   2011-10-14
> WG ID:           Individual Submission
> Number of pages: 19
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
>    extension mapping for the provisioning and management of domain names
>    during the launch phase of a domain name registry.
>
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