Re: [spring] Comments on draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases

Hi Tarek,
thank you for your thoughtful consideration of my comments. I've reviewed
the diff and got several follow-up notes:

   - the new text in the Introduction section explains the ISD as being
   encoded as labels:

within the label stack, e.g., encoded as labels, referred to as In

     Stack Data (ISD), and

I think s/as labels/into label stack elements/ makes the text a bit more
accurate. What do you think?


   - in my earlier comments, I've noted that the informational RFC 8596
   appears not posing any requirements for enhancements in the MPLS data
   plane. If I am missing something, please let me know.
   - I might have missed it earlier. The TSN is the term used for a very
   specific technology developed at IEEE to support, for example, URLLC
   services. The DetNet WG defines the methodology in support of these
   services using IETF technologies - MPLS and IP. I think it would be
   appropriate if an IETF document refers to Deterministic Networking, not
   TSN. What is your opinion?

Regards,
Greg


On Thu, Feb 24, 2022 at 5:52 AM Tarek Saad <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi Greg,
>
>
>
> Thanks for your comments. I’ve addressed several of your comments. The
> latest diffs (revision to be uploaded soon) can be found at:
>
>
> https://tools.ietf.org//rfcdiff?url1=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases-00.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tsaad-dev/drafts/master/miad-usecases/draft-dt-mpls-miad-usecases.txt
> <https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases-00.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tsaad-dev/drafts/master/miad-usecases/draft-dt-mpls-miad-usecases.txt>
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
> Tarek (for co-authors)
>
>
>
> *From: *spring <[email protected]> on behalf of Greg Mirsky <
> [email protected]>
> *Date: *Friday, February 18, 2022 at 4:15 PM
> *To: *[email protected] <
> [email protected]>, mpls <[email protected]>,
> [email protected] <[email protected]>, DetNet WG <[email protected]>, spring <
> [email protected]>
> *Subject: *[spring] Comments on draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases
>
> Dear Authors,
>
> thank you for your work putting this document together. It helps to
> analyze essential use cases in the scope of the work at the Open DT.
> Attached, please find a copy of the draft with my notes and some
> editorial suggestions. I hope you'll find some of them helpful.
>
> I am looking forward to your feedback and questions.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
> Greg
>

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