[Pals] Re: Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals- ple-12: (with COMMENT)
James Guichard <[email protected]> Tue, 3 Dec 2024 22:11:42 +0000
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--===============1685930694826339999== Content-Language: en-US Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_MW5PR13MB54850086479ED171C31CAE27D2362MW5PR13MB5485namp_" --_000_MW5PR13MB54850086479ED171C31CAE27D2362MW5PR13MB5485namp_ Content-Type: text/plain; charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Looks good! Jim From: Christian Schmutzer (cschmutz) <[email protected]> Date: Tuesday, December 3, 2024 at 4:38 PM To: James Guichard <[email protected]> Cc: Christian Schmutzer (cschmutz) <[email protected]>, The IESG <iesg@iet= f.org>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, pals-c= [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, stewa= [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <agmalis@= gmail.com> Subject: Re: Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-ple-12: (with C= OMMENT) Hi Jim, Thank you for your review. Please see responses below via [cs]. Changes are= included in new -13 draft revision Christian > On 02.12.2024, at 00:17, Jim Guichard via Datatracker <[email protected]> = wrote: > > Jim Guichard has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-pals-ple-12: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=3Dhtt= ps%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fabout%2Fgroups%2Fiesg%2Fstatements%2Fhandling-bal= lot-positions%2F&data=3D05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7C21dd54= efe91c47d0320608dd13e2bfa8%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C638= 688586795604737%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjA= uMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdat= a=3DVyd0AF6oCsrGIfstbv71eLIotIVEJcfRvhJ9Nkc76QQ%3D&reserved=3D0<https://www= .ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/> > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fdatat= racker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-pals-ple%2F&data=3D05%7C02%7Cjames.n.gui= chard%40futurewei.com%7C21dd54efe91c47d0320608dd13e2bfa8%7C0fee8ff2a3b24018= 9c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C638688586795622059%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFb= XB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldU= IjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=3Df6bmBC1OCB0QAi2WGDQJKsDGel9Kd2RMEn6qo5SnE= lQ%3D&reserved=3D0<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pals-ple/> > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thanks for this document. Minor comments: > > Section 3.1 'Terminology' - 'SRH - Segment Routing Header' is defined in = RFC > 8754 NOT RFC 8402. [cs] uups, cut&paste error. fixed > Section 3.1 'Terminology' - 'SR-TE - Segment Routing Traffic Engineering > [RFC9256]'. RFC 9256 defines Segment Routing Policy Architecture. Please = use a > reference that accurately reflects where you use the SR-TE term. [cs] I did the opposite and change from "SR-TE" to "SR policies=94 and remo= ve the entry from terminology > > > --_000_MW5PR13MB54850086479ED171C31CAE27D2362MW5PR13MB5485namp_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable <html xmlns:o=3D"urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w=3D"urn:sc= hemas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m=3D"http://schemas.microsoft.com/of= fice/2004/12/omml" xmlns=3D"http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40"> <head> <meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html; charset=3DWindows-1= 252"> <meta name=3D"Generator" content=3D"Microsoft Word 15 (filtered medium)"> <style><!-- /* Font Definitions */ @font-face {font-family:"Cambria Math"; panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4;} @font-face {font-family:Aptos; panose-1:2 11 0 4 2 2 2 2 2 4;} /* Style Definitions */ p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal {margin:0in; font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;} a:link, span.MsoHyperlink {mso-style-priority:99; color:blue; text-decoration:underline;} span.EmailStyle19 {mso-style-type:personal-reply; font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif; color:windowtext;} .MsoChpDefault {mso-style-type:export-only; font-size:10.0pt; mso-ligatures:none;} @page WordSection1 {size:8.5in 11.0in; margin:1.0in 1.0in 1.0in 1.0in;} div.WordSection1 {page:WordSection1;} --></style> </head> <body lang=3D"EN-US" link=3D"blue" vlink=3D"purple" style=3D"word-wrap:brea= k-word"> <div class=3D"WordSection1"> <p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">Looks good!<o:p></o= :p></span></p> <p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></= span></p> <p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt">Jim<o:p></o:p></spa= n></p> <p class=3D"MsoNormal"><span style=3D"font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></= span></p> <div id=3D"mail-editor-reference-message-container"> <div> <div> <div style=3D"border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in = 0in 0in"> <p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span style=3D"col= or:black">From: </span></b><span style=3D"color:black">Christian Schmutzer (cschmutz) <c= [email protected]><br> <b>Date: </b>Tuesday, December 3, 2024 at 4:38 PM<br> <b>To: </b>James Guichard <[email protected]><br> <b>Cc: </b>Christian Schmutzer (cschmutz) <[email protected]>, The I= ESG <[email protected]>, [email protected] <draft-ietf-pals= [email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, pals@= ietf.org <[email protected]>, [email protected] <stewart.bryant= @gmail.com>, [email protected] <[email protected]><br> <b>Subject: </b>Re: Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-ple-12: = (with COMMENT)<o:p></o:p></span></p> </div> <div> <p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style=3D"font-s= ize:11.0pt">Hi Jim,<br> <br> Thank you for your review. Please see responses below via [cs]. Changes are= included in new -13 draft revision<br> <br> Christian <br> <br> > On 02.12.2024, at 00:17, Jim Guichard via Datatracker <noreply@ietf= .org> wrote:<br> > <br> > Jim Guichard has entered the following ballot position for<br> > draft-ietf-pals-ple-12: No Objection<br> > <br> > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all<= br> > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut thi= s<br> > introductory paragraph, however.)<br> > <br> > <br> > Please refer to <a href=3D"https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/stat= ements/handling-ballot-positions/"> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fwww.iet= f.org%2Fabout%2Fgroups%2Fiesg%2Fstatements%2Fhandling-ballot-positions%2F&a= mp;data=3D05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7C21dd54efe91c47d03206= 08dd13e2bfa8%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C63868858679560473= 7%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiO= iJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=3DVyd0AF= 6oCsrGIfstbv71eLIotIVEJcfRvhJ9Nkc76QQ%3D&reserved=3D0</a> <br> > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions= .<br> > <br> > <br> > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:<br= > > <a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pals-ple/">http= s://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=3Dhttps%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker= .ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-pals-ple%2F&data=3D05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guich= ard%40futurewei.com%7C21dd54efe91c47d0320608dd13e2bfa8%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c= 753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C0%7C638688586795622059%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB= 0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIj= oyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=3Df6bmBC1OCB0QAi2WGDQJKsDGel9Kd2RMEn6qo5S= nElQ%3D&reserved=3D0</a><br> > <br> > <br> > <br> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------= <br> > COMMENT:<br> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------= <br> > <br> > Thanks for this document. Minor comments:<br> > <br> > Section 3.1 'Terminology' - 'SRH - Segment Routing Header' is defined = in RFC<br> > 8754 NOT RFC 8402.<br> <br> [cs] uups, cut&paste error. fixed<br> <br> > Section 3.1 'Terminology' - 'SR-TE - Segment Routing Traffic Engineeri= ng<br> > [RFC9256]'. RFC 9256 defines Segment Routing Policy Architecture. Plea= se use a<br> > reference that accurately reflects where you use the SR-TE term.<br> <br> [cs] I did the opposite and change from "SR-TE" to "SR polic= ies=94 and remove the entry from terminology<br> <br> > <br> > <br> > <o:p></o:p></span></p> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </body> </html> --_000_MW5PR13MB54850086479ED171C31CAE27D2362MW5PR13MB5485namp_-- --===============1685930694826339999== Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 Content-Disposition: inline X19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX19fX18KUGFscyBtYWls aW5nIGxpc3QgLS0gcGFsc0BpZXRmLm9yZwpUbyB1bnN1YnNjcmliZSBzZW5kIGFuIGVtYWlsIHRv IHBhbHMtbGVhdmVAaWV0Zi5vcmcK --===============1685930694826339999==--