AD review of: draft-ietf-rap-cops-tls-07.txt
"Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <[email protected]> Thu, 25 Mar 2004 22:14:16 +0100
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Took a while.. but I did find some time to do AD evaluation of this document. 1. In sect 3.2.1 you talk about Protocol and Flags. How does this fit into the ClientSI object defined in RFC2748. Is this something needs to be addressed/described in IANA Considerations? Where should IANA register this? How are future assignments to be made? For protocols? for flags? 2. In sect 3.2.2 you define new sub-error codes. How does that fit into the definition of RFC2748? Are the sub-error codes zero by default? ANyway, this needs more explanation in IANA considerations as to how/where IANA needs to put these new assignments and how future values can be allocated, no? 3. Section 7 states that the non-well-know port needs to be communicated by the server to the client. But it does not explain how. Am I missing something here? 4. You may want to add IPR and copyright notices as per RFCs3667/8/9 Thanks, Bert