Re: AD comments on draft-ietf-rmt-bb-fec-basic-schemes-revised-04
Brian Adamson <[email protected]>
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Thanks Mark! Brian Adamson [email protected] On Jul 12, 2008, at 5:14 PM, Mark Watson wrote: > I propose to address item 3 by changing the SHOULDs to MUSTs. The > other > comments all seem fine to me and I will submit an update shortly. > > ...Mark > > > On 4/18/08 2:52 AM, "Magnus Westerlund" <[email protected] > > > wrote: > >> Hi, >> >> I have made my AD review of the document and have the following >> comments. >> >> 1. Obsolete information in header, abstract and introduction. If I >> understand this correctly this document will replace RFC 3695 and >> parts >> of RFC 3452 that wasn't included in the already obsoleted one. >> >> 2. There is a missing "." in the last sentence of section 1. >> >> 3. Section 3.2.2.2: >> >> " The "Reserved" field in the Encoded FEC Object Transmission >> Information SHOULD be set to zero by senders and its value >> SHOULD be >> ignored by receivers." >> >> Using the definition of SHOULD here makes it pretty difficult to use >> this field in the future. I normally recommends that at least >> setting it >> needs to be MUST and usually also the ignore on receiver. So that >> if one >> deploys a new spec that uses these bits would not throw up on them. >> As I >> am uncertain how widely deployed this definition already is I only >> ask >> the WG to consider if this should be changed or not. >> >> 4. Section 5.3: >> >> I think there needs to be an additional sentence her to specify >> that if >> a instance is not using the algorithm it needs to specify what it >> uses. >> >> 5. Section 9. I think we need to move the registry rules forward from >> the going to be obsoleted RFCs 3695 and 3452. Thus please include the >> registry rules in this section and request that IANA changes the >> pointers for the rules to this doc. >> >> Cheers >> >> Magnus Westerlund >> >> IETF Transport Area Director & TSVWG Chair >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> Ericsson AB | Phone +46 8 4048287 >> Färögatan 6 | Fax +46 8 7575550 >> S-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden | mailto: [email protected] >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> > > > _______________________________________________ > Rmt mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rmt >