ROHCoIPSec submitted and Document Write-Up
Carl Knutsson <[email protected]>
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Hi all, I have asked the IESG to publish the ROHCoIPSec drafts as RFCs. As recommended in RFC4858 sending all three write-up to the rohc-list. ROHCoIPSec framework consists of the following drafts: draft-ietf-rohc-hcoipsec draft-ietf-rohc-ikev2-extensions-hcoipsec draft-ietf-rohc-ipsec-extensions-hcoipsec I want to thank the authors Emre, Chris, Rohan, Carsten, Tero and everyone in the WG that contributed to the ROHCoIPSec documents. Best regards, /Carl Knutsson (ROHC WG Chair) > Document write-up for draft-ietf-rohc-hcoipsec > > (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the > Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the > document and, in particular, does he or she believe this > version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? > > Carl Knutsson is the Document Shepherd. The document has > been personally reviewed by Document Shepherd and is ready > to be published as "Informational". > > (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members > and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have > any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that > have been performed? > > Yes, it has been reviewed by members of both ipsecme and rohc > WGs. The Document Shepherd have no concerns about the > depth or breadth of the reviews. > > (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document > needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, > e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with > AAA, internationalization or XML? > > No concerns. > > (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or > issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director > and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he > or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or > has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any > event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated > that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those > concerns here. Has an IPR disclosure related to this document > been filed? If so, please include a reference to the > disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on > this issue. > > No concerns. > > (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it > represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with > others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and > agree with it? > > There is a strong consensus behind the document. > > (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme > discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in > separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It > should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is > entered into the ID Tracker.) > > No conflicts or display of extreme discontent. > > (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the > document satisfies all ID nits? (See > http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and > http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are > not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document > met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB > Doctor, media type and URI type reviews? > > Yes. > > (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and > informative? Are there normative references to documents that > are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear > state? If such normative references exist, what is the > strategy for their completion? Are there normative references > that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If > so, list these downward references to support the Area > Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. > > Yes, No. > > (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA > consideration section exists and is consistent with the body > of the document? If the document specifies protocol > extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA > registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If > the document creates a new registry, does it define the > proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation > procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a > reasonable name for the new registry? See [RFC5226]. If the > document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd > conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG > can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation? > > Yes. > > (1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the > document that are written in a formal language, such as XML > code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in > an automated checker? > > Yes. > > (1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document > Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document > Announcement Write-Up? Recent examples can be found in the > "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval > announcement contains the following sections: > > Technical Summary > > IP Security (IPsec) provides various security services for > IP traffic. However, the benefits of IPsec come at the cost > of increased overhead. This document outlines a framework > for integrating Robust Header Compression (ROHC) over IPsec > (ROHCoIPsec). By compressing the inner headers of IP > packets, ROHCoIPsec proposes to reduce the amount of > overhead associated with the transmission of traffic over > IPsec Security Associations (SAs). > > > Working Group Summary > > The document represents rough consensus of the working group. > > Document Quality > > The document have been reviewed extensively by both members > from the ipsecme and the rohc working groups. During the WG > Last-Call the document was reviewed by the committed WG > reviewers Robert A. Stangarone Jr. and Yoav Nir. > > > Document write-up for draft-ietf-rohc-ikev2-extensions-hcoipsec > > (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the > Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the > document and, in particular, does he or she believe this > version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? > > Carl Knutsson is the Document Shepherd. The document has > been personally reviewed by Document Shepherd and is ready > to be published as Proposed Standard. > > (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members > and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have > any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that > have been performed? > > Yes, it has been reviewed by members of both ipsecme and > rohc WGs. The Document Shepherd have no concerns about the > depth or breadth of the reviews. > > (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document > needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, > e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with > AAA, internationalization or XML? > > No concerns. > > (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or > issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director > and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he > or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or > has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any > event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated > that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those > concerns here. Has an IPR disclosure related to this document > been filed? If so, please include a reference to the > disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on > this issue. > > No concerns. > > (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it > represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with > others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and > agree with it? > > There is a strong consensus behind the document. > > (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme > discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in > separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It > should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is > entered into the ID Tracker.) > > No conflicts or display of extreme discontent. > > (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the > document satisfies all ID nits? (See > http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and > http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are > not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document > met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB > Doctor, media type and URI type reviews? > > Yes. > > (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and > informative? Are there normative references to documents that > are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear > state? If such normative references exist, what is the > strategy for their completion? Are there normative references > that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If > so, list these downward references to support the Area > Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. > > Yes, No. > > (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA > consideration section exists and is consistent with the body > of the document? If the document specifies protocol > extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA > registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If > the document creates a new registry, does it define the > proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation > procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a > reasonable name for the new registry? See [RFC5226]. If the > document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd > conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG > can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation? > > Yes. > > (1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the > document that are written in a formal language, such as XML > code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in > an automated checker? > > Yes. > > (1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document > Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document > Announcement Write-Up? Recent examples can be found in the > "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval > announcement contains the following sections: > > Technical Summary > > As part of the ROHCoIPsec framework, this document defines > extensions to Internet Key Exchange version 2 (IKEv2) to > signal ROHC parameters between IPsec peers. > > > Working Group Summary > > The document represents rough consensus of the working group. > > Document Quality > > The document have been reviewed extensively by both members > from the ipsecme and the rohc working groups. During the WG > Last-Call the document was reviewed by the committed WG > reviewers Robert A. Stangarone Jr. and Yoav Nir. > > > Document write-up for draft-ietf-rohc-ipsec-extensions-hcoipsec.txt > > (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the > Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the > document and, in particular, does he or she believe this > version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? > > Carl Knutsson is the Document Shepherd. The document has > been personally reviewed by Document Shepherd and is ready > to be published as a Proposed Standard. > > (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members > and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have > any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that > have been performed? > > Yes, it has been reviewed by members of both ipsecme and > rohc WGs. The Document Shepherd have no concerns about the > depth or breadth of the reviews. > > (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document > needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, > e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with > AAA, internationalization or XML? > > No concerns. > > (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or > issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director > and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he > or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or > has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any > event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated > that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those > concerns here. Has an IPR disclosure related to this document > been filed? If so, please include a reference to the > disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on > this issue. > > No concerns. > > (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it > represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with > others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and > agree with it? > > There is a strong consensus behind the document. > > (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme > discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in > separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It > should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is > entered into the ID Tracker.) > > No conflicts or display of extreme discontent. > > (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the > document satisfies all ID nits? (See > http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and > http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are > not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document > met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB > Doctor, media type and URI type reviews? > > Yes. > > (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and > informative? Are there normative references to documents that > are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear > state? If such normative references exist, what is the > strategy for their completion? Are there normative references > that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If > so, list these downward references to support the Area > Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. > > Yes, No. > > (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA > consideration section exists and is consistent with the body > of the document? If the document specifies protocol > extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA > registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If > the document creates a new registry, does it define the > proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation > procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a > reasonable name for the new registry? See [RFC5226]. If the > document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd > conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG > can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation? > > Yes. > > (1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the > document that are written in a formal language, such as XML > code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in > an automated checker? > > Yes. > > (1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document > Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document > Announcement Write-Up? Recent examples can be found in the > "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval > announcement contains the following sections: > > Technical Summary > > Integrating ROHC with IPsec (ROHCoIPsec) offers the combined > benefits of IP security services and efficient bandwidth > utilization. This document describes the IPsec extensions to > the Security Policy Database (SPD) and the Security > Association Database (SAD) required to support ROHCoIPsec. > > Working Group Summary > > The document represents rough consensus of the working group. > > Document Quality > > The document have been reviewed extensively by both members > from the ipsecme and the rohc working groups. During the WG > Last-Call the document was reviewed by the committed WG > reviewers Robert A. Stangarone Jr. and Yoav Nir. > >