Re: Errata against ROHC RFCs

Lars Eggert <[email protected]> Tue, 1 Feb 2011 10:02:28 +0200
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Thanks, Carsten. I'll wait a few days to give others a chance to chime =
in, but your suggestions seem reasonable to me.

On 2011-1-31, at 21:02, Carsten Bormann wrote:

> On Jan 31, 2011, at 13:21, Lars Eggert wrote:
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>> Please discuss these errata on this list.
>=20
> Here is my assessment.
> Thanks for bringing these up!
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> Gruesse, Carsten
>=20
>=20
> * RFC 3816:
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> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D737
> -- many typos, some opportunity for editorial improvement
> -- very little risk for misinterpretation, except maybe for 2f
> -> Hold for Update
> (The large number of errata leaves the document in a somwhat sorry
> state.  It might be worthwhile to look at the implementation status of
> RFC 3816 to assess the need for a re-spin.)
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> * RFC 5795:
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> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D2107
> -- opportunity for minor editorial improvement
> -- no risk
> -> Hold for Update
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> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D2108
> -- errata submission simply misreads text (reads verb as noun)
> -- could be improved editorially anyway (but not in the way proposed)
> -- no risk
> -> Reject, but make note to improve this text in next update
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> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D2109
> -- proposed change is somewhat pedantic;
> -- it actually might reduce readability for some readers
> -- no risk
> -> Reject
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> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D2110
> "RFC Errata Report"
> -- punctuation fix (typo)
> -- no risk
> -> Hold for Update
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> * RFC 5857
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> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D2274
> -- editorial fix required: the wording on top of page 4 can be misread
>   (the section reference parenthesis is about the new Notify Message
>   Type value, not about the channel parameters carried by this
>   message type).
> -- also: this (and another) reference that should point to section 5
>   (IANA considerations) incorrectly say "Section 4" (they should not
>   say 3.1.2 as the errata states either).
> -- annoying, but very little risk of misunderstanding
> -> Hold for Update
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> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D2275
> -- typo
> -- no risk
> -> Hold for Update
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> * RFC 5858
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> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D2276
> -- typos
> -- no risk
> -> Hold for Update
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> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?eid=3D2277
> -- idea for a very desirable editorial improvement
> -- can probably be improved on further
> -- even without that improvement, minimal risk of misinterpretation
> -> Hold for Update
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