Re: AD comments on draft-ietf-rserpool-overview-02

Hi,

The update did resolve the first issue. I hade expected more on the 
second, but I think it is okay.

Cheers

Magnus

Magnus Westerlund skrev:
> Hi,
> 
> I have spent a few days reviewing the full set of RSERPOOL documents. So
> here is the comments in a number of different emails. A general comment
> about my comments on the full set is that some are not blocking
> publication but things I think should be fixing anyway for getting the
> document into better shape. However, many are such that I think they are
> preventing people from making interoperable implementations.
> 
> I think I have only one real comment about this document. It fails a bit
> short in being clear on the different communication flows that exist.
> This lack of clear separation of the roles is also present in the
> protocol specs that I think brings up details that belongs in other
> specifications. More about this in the protocol spec docs.
> 
> I think one should work on expanding figure 1 to be better covering the
> different elements of the solution and their flows. So a few proposals.
> 
> 1. Try to work multiple ENRP into the figure or abstract them in this
> one and add another figure that explains the relation between ENRP servers.
> 
> 2. Look at the individual communication flows.
> a. PU <-> ENRP
> b. PU <-> PE
> c. PE <-> ENRP
> d. ENRP <-> ENRP
> 
> I would focus on what is happening in the different flows. But there is
> problematic that an ENRP server uses both ASAP and ENRP depending who
> and why it communicates with someone.
> 
> Cheers
> 
> Magnus Westerlund
> 
> IETF Transport Area Director & TSVWG Chair
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Magnus Westerlund

IETF Transport Area Director & TSVWG Chair
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Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM
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Ericsson AB                | Phone +46 8 4048287
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