Re: Editorial corrections [Was: Re: [Fwd: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-sacred-protocol-bss-03.txt]]

> > > -Section 2.1.3, last sentence: Remove.
> > >
> > >  Reason: Not needed. Sentence is already in the previous paragraph.
> >
> > Nope. The "MUST" is needed (to match end user expectations). I think
> > its fine as is.
> 
> Sorry, meant Section 2.1.4.

Ahh, I see. Done then.

> 
> > > -Section 3.1, the example: Replace the "<![CDATA..." text with
> > >  something simpler, e.g. "<sacred:DownloadRequest.../>"
> > >
> > >  Reason: We use an XML schema, not a DTD to define the protocol. This
> > >  is the only place where CDATA is used in this memo.
> >
> > Nope. But I'll happily apply a concrete suggested change so long as
> > Marshall doesn't have any BEEP problems, i.e. no change made for now.
> 
> Marshall, does BEEP require sending of the "![CDATA..." ?

Nothing for me there:-)

Stephen.

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