[issue31] editorial comments

New submission from John Loughney <[email protected]>:

Editorial:

    In section 2.5.2 Context Transfer Activate Acknowledge (CTAA) 
Message:

        Reserved     Reserved for future use. Must be set to zero by the 
MN.
            >>could be changed with>>
        Must be set to zero by the sender of CTAA Message, i.e. pAR or 
nAR.

    In 2.5.3 Context Transfer Data (CTD) Message:

        A reliability flag, 'R'
            >>could be changed with>>
        An acknowlwdgement flag 'A'

        ...indicates whether a reply is required by nAR.
            >>could be changed with>>
        ...indicates whether a reply is required by pAR.

        Reserved   Reserved for future use.  Must be set to zero by the 
MN.
            >>could be changed with>>
        Must be set to zero by the pAR.

        Perhaps move here the description of 'Elapsed Time' which exists 
in section 3...

    In section 2.5.4  Context Transfer Data Reply (CTDR) Message

        Reserved   Reserved for future use.  Must be set to zero by the 
MN.
            >>could be changed with>>
        Must be set to zero by the nAR.

    In 2.5.5  Context Transfer Cancel (CTC) Message

        Reserved   Reserved for future use.  Must be set to zero by the 
MN.
            >>could be changed with>>
        Must be set to zero by the nAR.

    In 2.5.6 Context Transfer Request (CT Request) Message

       Reserved   Reserved for future use.  Must be set to zero by the 
                  MN.
            >>could be changed with>>
        Must be set to zero by the nAR.

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category: Editorial
document: draft-ietf-seamoby-ctp-05.txt
messages: 40
nosy: jloughney
priority: Should Fix
status: Text Proposed
title: editorial comments
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