RE: Review Period Reminder

[email protected] Tue, 4 May 2004 09:49:16 +0300
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.seamoby
Message-ID <[email protected]>
James,

A few smalll comments on this draft:

http://www.geocities.com/kempf42/draft-ietf-seamoby-iana-00.txt

1) Status of this memo section needs to be updated with new boilerplate.
2) Abstract margins need fixing.
3) Needs IPR text
4) Is this a protocol document or a information document? If it is
   info, then probably keywords (MUST; SHOULD; MAY, etc) shouldn't
   be used.
5) Section 5.2 - are these all of the possible L2