RE: Review Period Reminder
[email protected] Tue, 4 May 2004 09:49:16 +0300
| Newsgroups | gmane.ietf.seamoby |
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| Message-ID | <[email protected]> |
James, A few smalll comments on this draft: http://www.geocities.com/kempf42/draft-ietf-seamoby-iana-00.txt 1) Status of this memo section needs to be updated with new boilerplate. 2) Abstract margins need fixing. 3) Needs IPR text 4) Is this a protocol document or a information document? If it is info, then probably keywords (MUST; SHOULD; MAY, etc) shouldn't be used. 5) Section 5.2 - are these all of the possible L2