Nits in draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-04

Mayumi,

I note that my previous comments of substance have all been taken into
account.

However, nits that I sent to you privately (see attached email) have not
been into account.

In addition I have detected a further nit:

In section 5.1.1 it says:
"...and refer to Section 4.2 for details on how to obtain
   an IP address through TURN."
Since IP addresses are not mentioned in the rest of 5.1.1, this seems
irrelevant. The words should be deleted.

When these nits have been fixed, in my opinion the document will be
ready to go.

John

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