Re: I-D Action:draft-ietf-sipping-nat-scenarios-13.txt

On 2010/06/12 10:55, Frank Shearar wrote:
> On 2010/06/11 18:15, [email protected] wrote:
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Session Initiation Proposal
>> Investigation Working Group of the IETF.
>>
>>
>> Title : Best Current Practices for NAT Traversal for Client-Server SIP
>
>
> I'll read more later today and find more nits should they exist :)

Last paragraph of page 15: "This exonerates the need..." should be "This 
removes the need..." (To exonerate someone is to find them not guilty of 
some charges.)

Page 22 point 2 says

    2.  Secondly, the contact inserted contains to ensure that all new
        requests will be sent to the same flow.  Alternatively, a GRUU
        might have been used.  See 4.3/[RFC5626].

"the contact inserted contains" what? 'the "ob"' parameter'?

Page 23, message (3) isn't indented, where most (all?) of the other 
messages are indented 3 spaces.

frank
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