Re: I-D Action:draft-ietf-sipping-nat-scenarios-13.txt
Frank Shearar <[email protected]> Mon, 14 Jun 2010 20:53:37 +0200
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On 2010/06/14 20:26, Fabio Margarido wrote: > On Sat, Jun 12, 2010 at 05:55, Frank Shearar > <[email protected]> wrote: >> "The first is when using a reliable, connection orientated transport >> protocol such as TCP, SIP has an inherent mechanism ..." rewrite as: >> >> "The first is that when SIP uses a reliable, connection orientated transport >> protocol such as TCP, it has an inherent mechanism ... > > Shouldn't it be "The first is when using a reliable, connection > oriented transport (...)"? Well, I had to reread that sentence a number of times before I could figure out the structure, never mind what it was saying. Looking at my suggestion again, perhaps this is an improvement: The first is when SIP uses a reliable, connection orientated transport protocol such as TCP. In this case, SIP has an inherent mechanism ... and then start the last sentence of the paragraph like so: The second case is when SIP uses an unreliable transport protocol such as UDP, where ... frank _______________________________________________ Sipping mailing list https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/sipping This list is for NEW development of the application of SIP Use [email protected] for questions on current sip Use [email protected] for new developments of core SIP