RE: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-tewg-measure-06.txt
Jim Boyle <[email protected]> Tue, 21 Oct 2003 11:21:18 -0700 (PDT)
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Waisum, we will have time on the agenda for this. I've been meaning to printout an old version-05 to compare so I hope to have it read by me soon. I encourage everyone else to read this and provide feedback as well. thanks, Jim On Tue, 21 Oct 2003, Lai, Wai S (Waisum), ALABS wrote: > Bert, > We would like to have some feedback from you regarding the TEM draft, > especially if the revised (06) version has met your expectations and > objectives in the AD review that you sent out previously. > > Jim, Ed, > We'd like to have some time on the TEWG agenda to discuss the updated > I-D. > > Thanks, Wai Sum > > -----Original Message----- > From: Ash, Gerald R (Jerry), ALABS > Sent: Wednesday, August 20, 2003 9:47 AM > To: Lai, Wai S (Waisum), ALABS; Wijnen, Bert (Bert); [email protected] > Cc: Ash, Gerald R (Jerry), ALABS > Subject: RE: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-tewg-measure-06.txt > > > > From: Lai, Wai S (Waisum), ALABS > > Sent: Monday, July 28, 2003 7:56 AM > > To: Wijnen, Bert (Bert); [email protected] > > Subject: RE: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-tewg-measure-06.txt > > > > Bert and all, > > > > Many thanks for the AD review and the subsequent comments. > > We have now completed our revision of the TE Measurement draft > > based on your inputs. The main body of document has been much > > shortened and streamlined - with requirements clearly identified. > > Supporting materials have been moved to Appendices. > > Please review. > > > > Thanks, Wai Sum > > I think the 06-draft http://ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-tewg-measure-06.txt well addresses Bert's comments: > > 'I would expect a CRISP set of "requirements for additional measurements, configurable/negotiable parameters/controls" ... but not the extensive exploration and text that I now see'. > > The requirements are now clearly identified for additional measurements, configurable/negotiable parameters/controls, etc., and the main text has been greatly shortened. > > It would be good to hear from Bert on this. Can we now move forward and finalize? > > Thanks, > Jerry >