Re: AD review of: draft-ietf-tewg-interas-mpls-te-req-06.txt (fwd)

Hi Jim,
Many thanks for looking it over...

[snip...]
These are very minor nits at this point, so no need to resubmit just
>for this at this time.

Ok, I will go ahead fix what've suggested below but will not resubmit at=20
this time.
 > 1. ID-nits check:
> >    $ idnits-v1.24 <drafts/draft-ietf-tewg-interas-mpls-te-req-06.txt
> >    idnits 1.24, 16 Apr 2004, 07:05
> >
> >    Line 479 contains non-ascii character in position 29.
> >    -->    network.  This allows SP1=C6s customers connected to SP2 PE=20
> router to
> >                                   ^
>
>still not fixed, please do so.

I thought I did... Will do.

> > 2. Pls remove section: draft-ietf-tewg-interas-mpls-te-req-06.txt
> >    This makes no sense once it gets to "Publication requested" stage.
>
>Not done, please remove
>"Summary for Sub-IP related Internet Drafts"
>to
>"interoperable with current intra-AS traffic engineering mechanisms."

Will do, thanks...
 >
> > 6. Lots of acronyms are used without being expanded the first time thye
> >    are used.
>
>I trust you took this into consideration

Yes... I've gone through all of them and expanded where it is needed.


> >
> > 7. Sect 6.1 .... MMM.... what does it really mean?
> >    It is so flexible, that ... oh well ...
> >
> > 8. End of sect 6.2 says:
> >       Other criteria might be added as this draft will evolve.
> >    while this draft is now "complete", no?
>
>Section 6 is gone now, which should address (7) and (8).
>What is stated, is what is required.

Right...

Thanks once again.

Regards,
Raymond