Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id-27
Bob Briscoe <[email protected]>
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Bernard, Thank you again. I also added you to the Acknowledgements section after I temporarily uploaded the diff. I will hold back from posting a new rev until early next week, to give my co-author a chance to check it over. Bob On 05/08/2022 01:59, Bernard Aboba wrote: > Bob -- > > Thanks for the thoughtful and thorough response to my review. I have gone > through the changes you suggest, and they look good to me. > > On Thu, Aug 4, 2022 at 4:57 PM Bob Briscoe <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Bernard, >> >> Thank you for taking the time to produce this extremely thorough review. >> Pls see [BB] inline; >> You will need an HTML email reader for the diffs in this email. >> Alternatively, I've temporarily uploaded a side-by-side diff here: >> >> https://bobbriscoe.net/tmp/draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id-28a-DIFF-27.html >> >> >> On 30/07/2022 00:51, Bernard Aboba via Datatracker wrote: >> >> Reviewer: Bernard Aboba >> Review result: On the Right Track >> >> Here are my review comments. I believe this is quite an important document, so >> that making the reasoning as clear as possible is important. Unfortunately, >> the writing and overall organization makes the document hard to follow. If the >> authors are open to it, I'd be willing to invest more time to help get it into >> shape. >> >> >> [BB] Thank you. You have already obviously sunk considerable time into it -- ________________________________________________________________ Bob Briscoe http://bobbriscoe.net/