Commit in docs/usefor (usepro.xml)
[email protected] Mon, 25 May 2009 17:31:33 -0700 (PDT)
| Newsgroups | gmane.ietf.usenet.format |
|---|---|
| Message-ID | <[email protected]> |
Date: Monday, May 25, 2009 @ 17:31:32
Author: eagle
Revision: 5927
Add multiple minor typo fixes and clarifications.
Examples showing newsgroup description information now include a specific
note saying that the spaces are typographic and that in real messages
tabs are required. Checkgroups update moderation status as well.
Modified:
docs/usefor/usepro.xml
Modified: docs/usefor/usepro.xml
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--- docs/usefor/usepro.xml 2009-05-26 00:19:41 UTC (rev 5926)
+++ docs/usefor/usepro.xml 2009-05-26 00:31:32 UTC (rev 5927)
@@ -959,7 +959,7 @@
<t>A relaying agent accepts injected articles from injecting and
other relaying agents and passes them on to relaying or serving
agents. To avoid bypass of injecting agent policies and forgery
- of Path and Injector-Info headers, relaying agents SHOULD accept
+ of Path and Injection-Info headers, relaying agents SHOULD accept
articles only from trusted agents.</t>
<t>An article SHOULD NOT be relayed unless the sending agent has
@@ -1759,7 +1759,7 @@
</figure>
<figure>
- <preamble>The content of the application/news-groupinfo body
+ <preamble>The content of the application/news-checkgroups body
part is defined as:</preamble>
<artwork type="abnf">
@@ -1794,6 +1794,10 @@
is present, all groups that exist in that hierarchy MUST be
listed unless its scope is limited by external information, in
which case all groups SHOULD be listed.</t>
+
+ <t>Spaces are used in this example for formatting reasons. In
+ an actual message the newsgroup name and description MUST be
+ separated by one or more tabs (HTAB, ASCII %d09), not spaces.</t>
</section>
</section>
@@ -1961,6 +1965,11 @@
--nxtprt--
</artwork>
</figure>
+
+ <t>Spaces are used in this example for formatting reasons. In
+ an actual message the newsgroup name and description MUST be
+ separated by one or more tabs (HTAB, ASCII %d09), not
+ spaces.</t>
</section>
</section>
@@ -1986,7 +1995,8 @@
valid groups in a hierarchy with descriptions and moderation
status. It requests that a news server update its valid newsgroup
list for that hierarchy to include the groups specified, remove
- any groups not specified, and update group descriptions to match
+ any groups not specified, and update group descriptions and
+ moderation status to match
those given in the checkgroups control message. The syntax of
its Control header field is:</t>
@@ -2213,9 +2223,10 @@
difficulty of authenticating them and their widespread abuse.</t>
<t>Cancel control messages are not required to have the same
- Newsgroups header field as the messages they are cancelling and,
- since they are sometimes processed before the original message is
- received, it may not be possible to check that they do. This
+ Newsgroups header field as the messages they are cancelling.
+ Since they are sometimes processed before the original message is
+ received, it may not be possible to check that the Newsgroup
+ header fields match. This
allows a malicious poster to inject a cancel control message for
an article in a moderated newsgroup without adding an Approved
header field to the control message, and to hide malicious cancel