Re: Possible typos

Hi Russ,

Thanks for your commits.

>> By the way, why does "Supersedes" always begin with a capital?  When
>> we do not speak about the header, it should be a lower-case letter
>> shouldn't it?  For instance in 3.4, "which cancels or Supersedes
>> another article".
>
> The RFC Editor noticed that too and lowercased it.  I added a
> parenthetical reference to the Supersedes header field, which is what I
> was trying to reference in too subtle of a way.

I see you added the reference once (that's fine -- no need to say it
several times).


>>    Cancel control messages are not required to have the same Newsgroups
>>    header field as the messages they are cancelling and, since they are
>>    sometimes processed before the original message is received, it may not
>>    be possible to check that they do.
>>
>> "to check what they do"?  "to check that"?
>
> Reworded, thanks.

Your new wording is clearer, thanks!

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