IESG review of draft-ietf-vpim-address-02.txt

[email protected] Thu, 04 Apr 2002 10:47:47 -0800 (PST)

Newsgroups	gmane.ietf.vpim
Message-ID	<[email protected]>

The IESG reviewed this document today and had some comments:

(1) The term "RHS" needs to be defined in addition to "LHS" in section
    2. (Missed this one, sorry.)

(2) The term "onramp" is used but not defined. A definition or a reference
    needs to be included in the document.

(3) The RFC Editor is pushing back on acronyms in titles and abstracts.
    "VPIM" should be expanded in both places.

(4) References need to be split into two groups: Normative and non-normative.

(5) The address [email protected] needs to be changed to [email protected] throughout.

That's it!

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