Re: Comments on Action:draft-brown-versioning-link-relations-03

Jan Algermissen wrote:
> 
> On Nov 26, 2009, at 2:29 PM, Julian Reschke wrote:
> 
>>
>> "When a resource is put under version control, it becomes a "versioned 
>> resource". Many servers protect versioned resources from modifications 
>> by considering them "checked in", and by requiring a "checkout" 
>> operation before modification, and a "checkin" operation to go back to 
>> the "checked-in" state. Other servers allow modification, in which 
>> case the checkout/checkin operation may happen implicitly."
>>
> 
>> When a resource is put under version control, it becomes a "versioned 
>> resource". Many servers protect versioned resources from modifications 
>> by considering them "checked in", and by requiring a "checkout" 
>> operation before modification, and a "checkin" operation to go back to 
>> the "checked-in" state. Other servers allow modification and perfrom 
>> versioning without requiring an explicit checkout operation.
> 
> 
> I feel there should be the notion of 'modification of checked-out 
> working copy' in there but I don't mean to say that your above wording 
> isn't suitable also.
> ...

For now I have applied my change proposal in 
<http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-brown-versioning-link-relations-latest.html#rfc.section.2>, 
but that doesn't mean we can't spend some more time with wordsmithing :-)

BR, Julian