Re: WGLC of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-02

Am 14.10.2014 01:17, schrieb Ben Campbell:
> (Oops, messed up the authors' address the first time. Apologies for the duplicate.)
>
> This is a Working Group Last Call of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-02. The draft is available at the following URL:
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> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-02
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> The WGLC will conclude on 27 October, 2014. Please send your comments to the authors and the XMPP mailing list.

minor editorial stuff:
 > While this approach was developed for use in the Extensible
 > Messaging and Presence Protocol (XMPP) as a Domain Name
 > Association prooftype, it can be applied to any non-HTTP

"Domain Name Association (DNA) prooftype" (as done at the end of the 
introduction)?

section 1:
 > The product managers in your company are pushing you

bugging you? :-)

section 3.2:
 > The client performs an HTTPS GET for the URL

HTTPS GET _request_ for the URL?