Re: WGLC of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-02

On 10/25/14, 2:16 AM, Philipp Hancke wrote:
> Am 14.10.2014 01:17, schrieb Ben Campbell:
>> (Oops, messed up the authors' address the first time. Apologies for
>> the duplicate.)
>>
>> This is a Working Group Last Call of draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-02. The
>> draft is available at the following URL:
>>
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-xmpp-posh-02
>>
>> The WGLC will conclude on 27 October, 2014. Please send your comments
>> to the authors and the XMPP mailing list.
>
> minor editorial stuff:
>  > While this approach was developed for use in the Extensible
>  > Messaging and Presence Protocol (XMPP) as a Domain Name
>  > Association prooftype, it can be applied to any non-HTTP
>
> "Domain Name Association (DNA) prooftype" (as done at the end of the
> introduction)?
>
> section 1:
>  > The product managers in your company are pushing you
>
> bugging you? :-)
>
> section 3.2:
>  > The client performs an HTTPS GET for the URL
>
> HTTPS GET _request_ for the URL?

Ack. Thanks for the suggestions. :-)

Peter